上海中考英语145（助力高中）免费助力上海学生中考英语达成145分以上，重点突破与达成以下目标：

1.听说测试达到满分（复述与表达），

2. 写作达到A档18分以上

3. 听力语法词汇阅读达到扣分2分以内

4. 为高中四大题型打基础（翻译与概要写作、语法填空，词汇填空和完形填空）

提示：

（1）上海中考听说测试2023年开始将从目前的10分增加到15-20分，用来筛选学生的意图更明显。

（2）上海初中英语从2023年开始将改版，目前用了将近20年的牛津教材将成为历史，而高中教材已于2020年率先改版，对学生的能力要求更上一个台阶。

今天开始发几位基础薄弱初三学生的作文修改（坐标：杨浦区内最底层的学校之一，定位：100-110）

只有同辈作文，才能深有感触；只有对比原文和我的修改稿，才能懂得写作之道。请珍惜最最最干货！

修改前 My special experience as a volunteer

I was a volunteer in the library last summer holiday. However, something special happened to me during my work. A boy returned me a book that he had borrowed from the library. But after a few minutes, I couldn’t find the book! I was very nervous because I made a mistake. I had to pay for the missing book. Although I could have the excuse that I never found the book to avoid punishment, I still admitted that it was my fault. Suddenly, a staff member called me and reminded me that there was a book on my seat. That was the missing one! When I was praised by all the staff in the library，I felt too proud of myself to say a word. From the special experience, I learned about taking responsibility is very important. It makes you a more responsible and respectable person.

修改后： My special experience

I was a volunteer in the library last summer holiday. However, there was a problem during my work. A boy returned me a book that he had borrowed from the library. But after a few minutes, I couldn’t find the book! I was very nervous because I made a mistake. I had to pay for the missing book. Although I could have the excuse that I failed to find the book to avoid punishment， I still admitted that it was my fault. Suddenly, a staff member called me and reminded me that there was a book on my seat. That was the missing one! When I was praised by all the staff in the library，I felt too proud of myself to say a word. From the experience, I learned about taking responsibility is very important. It makes you a more responsible and respectable person.