如何在欢送会上发言（欢送会发言简短句子）

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如何在欢送会上发言,欢送会发言简短句子(1)

【真题再现】

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。

（1）回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；

（2）谈谈收获或感想；

（3）表达祝愿与期望。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

How time flies! _____________________________

________________________________________________

Thank you.

（2016天津卷书面表达）

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【审题定调】

本题要求写一篇在欢送会上的发言稿。时态的运用比较灵活：回顾过去主要用过去时，收获和感想主要用现在时，表达祝愿和期望主要用将来时。人称以第一人称为主，以增加亲近感。

【谋篇布局】

发言稿通常分称呼、开头、正文、结尾四个部分。

本题已给出了称呼、开头和结尾部分，故只需根据提示写出正文即可。正文要点为“回顾双方的交流活动”，“谈谈收获或感想”以及“表达祝愿与期望”。

【参考范文】

Dear friends,

How time flies! Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings.

As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists' works.

In my opinion, everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope we'll get together again next year.

Thank you.

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【范文点评】

本文完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了所有内容要点并作了适当发挥：首段表达离别之情；第二段回忆参与的活动；第三段谈感想、表期望。范文应用的较为复杂的语法结构有“as 过去分词”作状语、"while 动词-ing形式"作状语等。范文用词准确，使用的高级词汇有go by, on behalf of, participate, instructive, sincerely等。同时，范文使用了恰当的连接成分，如in my opinion, at last等。

【实战演练】

下面是一位同学的习作，请根据点评中指出的问题对它进行修改。

Dear friends,

How time flies! It has been two weeks since we met for the first time. During the two weeks, we had a memorable experience with our friends from England. I’d like to share it with you.

Looking back to the past two weeks, we attended the same class, did exercise in the same playground and lived in the same dormitory. Through different kinds of activities, we have broken the difference between our two cultures and developed strong friendships. Not only did the exchange activities broaden our horizons, but we have realized the advantages of communicating.

At last I represent the Student Council to wish all of you a good journey home. I also hope that our friendships will last forever.

Thank you.

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【点评】

该习作完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖了所有主要内容、应用了丰富的语法结构和较高级的词汇、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。存在的问题有：①部分代词指代不清，如we和our有时指作者和来访的学生，有时指中国学生，有时指两国学生；②部分表达不准确，如broken the difference及I represent；③文中漏掉了一个次要点：有关文艺方面的活动。

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答案

Dear friends,

How time flies! It has been two weeks since you came to our school. During the two weeks, I had a memorable experience. I'd like to share it with you.

Looking back to the past two weeks, we attended the same class, did exercise in the same playground and some of us even lived in the same dormitory. Besides, your performances in the welcome party were amazing. Through different kinds of activities, we have broken down barriers between our two cultures and developed strong friendships. Not only did the exchange activities broaden our horizons, but we have realized the advantages of communicating.

At last on behalf of the Student Council, I wish all of you a good journey home. I also hope that our friendships will last forever.

Thank you.

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